Tuesday, February 23, 2010

Part II response / Feb. 22

The three people who reviewed my paper seemed to feel that points were clear, although the discussion needed more development. With the option of reflection of what other potential issues might be for snail total mass changes, I explored other texts that had tested variables that could affect snail mass. This helped for me to articulate the basis thoughts that I had about this.

Although it seems like there is excessive citing, all were from authors who had performed experiments that were helpful to draw upon in conclusion. Four more citing were used from prior experiments to substantiate my views.

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