Feb 8 / Letter to Editor

February 8, 2010

Dr. Rebeca Price

BES 301 Science Editor

University of Washington Bothell

Bothell, WA

Dear Dr. Price:

Recently my paper, “Will the Dogwelk snail grow differently depending on location?” was reviewed by two peers. All points of view have been very interesting, and were instrumental in clarifying for me the best presentation of the piece.

The alterations that were made include:

1. Presentation of an essay instead of a response to questions posed. The addition of an image to be more conversational, and also the use of columns to better replicate the final product.
2. The textbox was included under the graphs.
3. The citing by Price was adjusted to the correct information.
4. The units were added on the sidebar for weight percentage.

I feel confident that you will find the alterations make for a more substantial paper, but please let me know if there are any other suggestions that you might find. Thank you.

Teresa Bower